anonfeedme ([personal profile] anonfeedme) wrote2012-07-02 05:55 pm


inspired by previous fic feedback memes.

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(Anonymous) 2012-07-06 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)

(Anonymous) 2012-07-07 01:19 pm (UTC)(link)
your writing is good

just a minor, tiny problem:
“But I am going to put a tracker here,” Hyunjoong adds, “Just in case someone else accidentally happens upon it.”
the 'just' shouldn't be capitalised if it's part of a sentence that hasn't been finished (signified by your commas)