anonfeedme ([personal profile] anonfeedme) wrote2012-07-02 05:55 pm


inspired by previous fic feedback memes.

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[personal profile] greatfountain 2012-07-06 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
[personal profile] greatfountain at [personal profile] songbirdspeaks or [ profile] fourlttrepitaph

bring it!
Edited 2012-07-06 00:43 (UTC)

(Anonymous) 2012-07-06 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
your way with words is amazing - when you write, things come alive, and i try so hard to emulate what you do but then it never turns out the same way. every part of a story is something tangible with you, something you can feel and smell and touch, and i wish i knew how to write details like you do to make my own work feel like this.

and, obviously, your dialogue makes me green with envy. ♥
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[personal profile] greatfountain 2012-07-06 07:48 pm (UTC)(link)
i wonder who this is???

lol but seriously. thank you so much it really means a lot to me to hear you say that since most of my shit is seen by you first :')

i do my best work with dialogue, so i'm glad to hear it continues to work for you ♥
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[personal profile] ser_pounce_alot 2012-07-07 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
i have no idea what you could mean i obviously did not write that

oh shit i'm signed in now YEAH WELL WHATEVER YOU KNEW IT WAS ME LOL

i love your writing and you know it ♥ so write more

(and send it to me first SPOILED YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH)
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[personal profile] rydain 2012-07-06 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how you can paint a scene with atmosphere and specifics rather than necessarily showing it all in chronological order, which is a skill I can really stand to pick up myself. You also have a natural sense for weaving in those subtleties of characterization and setting which make the story all about those specific people in their specific moment, even if it's just a short PWP. No pressure, of course, but I would love to see some Dynasty Warriors man porn out of you. ♥
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[personal profile] greatfountain 2012-07-06 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for all of this!! I try really hard to set scenes in an immediate kind of way without necessarily doing it all at once, when I do it that way it always comes out really wooden, so I'm glad that and my characterization (which is something I admittedly do more subtly than would maybe be called for sometimes) work for you!

I would love to work on some manporn at some point! As soon as the crazy summer of fandom involvement is over I may well do some :')